I crossed thousand miles in a day
But can’t seem to cross few meters in years
The eternal distance between us
Am I dreaming?
Or stuck in reality
You burst with joy
As people get closer to you
Some known
Some unknown
While I longingly wait
For my turn to walk the distance
I brave the stormy rain, the burning sun
All filthy tests of nature
But the wait seems endless
Then someone walks through me
I feel pain
Not sure if it is physical
I want to move away
But I cannot
Plead with the passerby
To take me along
No one cares
For the fallen soul
A beautiful girl comes by
I am shaken
To wake up
To reality.
6 comments:
interesting da way it ends
You have found her,
now go and get her!!!
Nice Baharul!!! This is the first time I'm reading our blog, sorry for that but now I'm sure how good writer you are. Neways keep up the good work.....
waits are not always endless.....n wen d beautiful girl has come to u,go ahead with her n walk the line.
The last two lines - cool and practical..
"Then someone walks through me
I feel pain" - i loved the idea of some one walking through you!
keep writing..
So You are a poet!! but that doesnt mean u understand poetry.. that's because poetry is personal. it means different things for different persons. so interpreting it as the one and only thing is wrong.. nice one.. really nice
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